I made some clarity comments on the document using the wiki software.
Thanks
On Mon, Jan 17, 2022 at 1:02 AM Di Ma madi@juicybun.cn wrote:
German,
I am writing to report two typos in this document. 1) As in section 'RIR Policy Updates', the last word of the first sentence should have been 'meeting', not a plural one.
- As in section 'ICANN Board Election Process Review ', the third person
singular would be better where 'our' is used in 'The ASO AC updated our procedures.....'
Di
*From:* German Valdez german@apnic.net *Date:* 2022-01-15 10:11 *To:* ac-discuss@aso.icann.org *Subject:* [AC-DISCUSS] 2021 ASO AC Transparency Review Last Call for Editing/Comments
Dear ASO AC
As per * Action Item 220112-3: *The ASO AC will have a 7-day period for making modifications or additions to the Annual Transparency Review report, after which there will be a 7-day comments period. If no objections are raised, the report will be approved and published by the Secretariat in 14 days.
This is a last call for comments for the 2021 ASO AC Transparency Review. Document is available in the open section of the ASO Wiki at
https://asowiki.atlassian.net/l/c/pfdSZ2a7
This version in based on last document shared KB in the ac-discuss list on 12 January.
- Last day for editing: 23 January 2022
- Last day for comments: 30 January 2022
- Publication date: 31 January 2022
Regards
German
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