I made some clarity comments on the document using the wiki software.

Thanks

On Mon, Jan 17, 2022 at 1:02 AM Di Ma madi@juicybun.cn wrote:

German,

I am writing to report two typos in this document. 1) As in section 'RIR Policy Updates', the last word of the first sentence should have been 'meeting', not a plural one.

2. As in section 'ICANN Board Election Process Review ', the third person

singular would be better where 'our' is used in 'The ASO AC updated our procedures.....'

Di

*From:* German Valdez german@apnic.net *Date:* 2022-01-15 10:11 *To:* ac-discuss@aso.icann.org *Subject:* [AC-DISCUSS] 2021 ASO AC Transparency Review Last Call for Editing/Comments

Dear ASO AC

As per * Action Item 220112-3: *The ASO AC will have a 7-day period for making modifications or additions to the Annual Transparency Review report, after which there will be a 7-day comments period. If no objections are raised, the report will be approved and published by the Secretariat in 14 days.

This is a last call for comments for the 2021 ASO AC Transparency Review. Document is available in the open section of the ASO Wiki at

https://asowiki.atlassian.net/l/c/pfdSZ2a7

This version in based on last document shared KB in the ac-discuss list on 12 January.

• Last day for editing: 23 January 2022
• Last day for comments: 30 January 2022
• Publication date: 31 January 2022

Regards

German

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