Looks good to me.
I also support the minor editorial changes and fixing the tense (now that the transition has occurred).
___Jason
On Mon, Aug 12, 2019 at 11:37 AM herve.clement@orange.com wrote:
Hello,
Just a '.' replaced by a ',' for me in the first line:
"As we are moving towards the implementation of Recommendation 16 (ASO should favor the use of publicly archived mailing list), we have created the AC-Discuss mailing...." Instead of: "As we are moving towards the implementation of Recommendation 16 (ASO should favor the use of publicly archived mailing list). We have created the AC-Discuss mailing...."
I'm comfortable with the rest of the text, thanks.
Kind regards
Hervé
-----Message d'origine----- De : ac-discuss-bounces@aso.icann.org [mailto: ac-discuss-bounces@aso.icann.org] De la part de Nurani Nimpuno Envoyé : mercredi 7 août 2019 15:59 À : Aftab Siddiqui Cc : ac-discuss@aso.icann.org Objet : Re: [AC-DISCUSS] Action Item: 190703-3
Hi,
Just a few editorial changes to tidy up the language. Otherwise fine with me. :)
Kind regards,
Nurani
On 7 Aug 2019, at 13:58, Aftab Siddiqui aftab.siddiqui@gmail.com
wrote:
Action Item 190703-3: AS to circulate the draft text on subscriptions
and posting rights for ac-discuss to the ac-discuss mailing list for a seven day comment period.
The only change from Action Item 190515-02 in below text is the removal
of "by email" after the secretariat in the last paragraph (last word).
====== As we are moving towards the implementation of Recommendation 16 (ASO
should favor the use of publicly archived mailing list). We have created AC-Discuss mailing (for day to day operational discussion) and will be transitioning from "ac-coord” to
We have created the AC-Discuss mailing list
"ac-discuss" mailing list in July 2019. Secretariat has moved all the
existing aso-ac members and observers (after confirmation
The secretariat has moved
from respective organisations such as RIRs, ICANN and IANA) to
"ac-discuss" mailing list.
from the respective organisations … to the “ac-discuss” mailing list
Currently, all the members of the ac-coord mailing list have the email
posting rights. ASO-AC has decided to document the
have email posting rights
observers into two categories "Observers with posting rights" and
"Observers with no posting rights" on the ac-discuss mailing list. There is no restriction on the number of observers from RIRs, ICANN or IANA (as long as they are current staff members and using official email addresses) but it is requested that all (RIRs, ICANN and IANA) should notify the secretariat that who
should get the posting rights,
notify the secretariat who should have posting rights
and be considered as having the authority to speak on behalf of their
organisation. By default all observers will be marked as non-posting observers, only members of ASO-AC, Secretariat, NRO-EC members and ICANN Board members (elected by ASO-AC) have the posting rights.
have posting rights
NRO-EC members (representing RIRs), ICANN and IANA may add/remove
observer (from their organisation) and request to
may add/remove observers
change the posting rights of any observer (from their organisation) by
notifying secretariat.
by notifying the secretariat.
=====
Regards,
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